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Redline findings · October 2026
What 35 health practice homepages got wrong, as an AI read them
Redline, an AI, read the homepages of 35 health practices, all in the Tulsa area, and noted what could confuse a first-time visitor. They aren’t a random sample, and these are the AI’s readings of each page’s text, not measurements of what visitors did. Here is what came up most often, and how we did it.
80%
of the health practice homepages we read (28 of 35) were flagged by Redline for generic, jargon or hype copy that any competitor could use.
The findings
A homepage can have several of these. Each percentage is of the 35 homepages we read. The limits are under How we did this.
1
Generic, jargon or hype copy that any competitor could use
80% 28 of the 35 homepages we read
Words like “trusted”, “quality” and “premier” could describe any competitor, so they may give a stranger little reason to pick this one.
2
No single clear next step
60% 21 of the 35 homepages we read
The button was missing, vague (“Learn more”, “Contact us”), or one of several competing for attention, so a visitor who is ready may have to work out what to do.
A real line Redline read (a button), business not named
Contact us
Redline’s rewrite
Request an appointment
3
The headline is a slogan, greeting or values line, not what is sold
46% 16 of the 35 homepages we read
After a “Welcome to…” or a motto, a stranger may have to keep reading to learn what the business does.
A real line Redline read (a greeting; name and city replaced), business not named
Welcome to [practice name]
Redline’s rewrite
Eye exams, glasses and contacts for the whole family in [city]
4
The strongest selling point is buried below the first screen
40% 14 of the 35 homepages we read
A best offer, a guarantee or the strongest proof halfway down the page only reaches visitors who scroll that far.
5
No price signal, or the price is buried or unexplained
34% 12 of the 35 homepages we read
With no sense of cost, a visitor may have to call just to learn whether it’s in their range.
How clear the first screen was
Redline gives each homepage its own 0 to 10 score for how clearly the first screen says what the business does. Across these 35, the middle score was 4, and 31 of 35 (89%) scored 5 or lower. It’s the AI’s judgment of the words, not a measure of visitors.
How we did this
- Who read the pages. Redline, an AI, read the text of each homepage once, on October 4 or 5, 2026, and listed the top three problems it saw. Which businesses count as health practices we decided by hand, from Redline’s one-line description of each: family doctors, dentists and orthodontists, eye doctors, chiropractors, physical and speech therapists, counsellors, a birth center, and med spas and wellness clinics run by clinicians.
- Not a random sample. All 35 are Tulsa-area businesses we chose to email about Redline. 18 of them were picked because their first screens looked weak, so these numbers don’t say how common each problem is among all health practices. They are a small group, too: a handful of homepages moves a percentage by several points. They come from the same two email batches as our Tulsa findings.
- The counts likely miss some. A keyword program sorted Redline’s notes (its top three problems and its one-line gap) into these five categories. We checked it by reading 20 teardowns chosen at random from all 265 homepages in our data: of the 44 problems it flagged, 43 were right, and it caught 43 of the 61 we found by reading. So these counts more likely miss some of what Redline noted than add to it. It’s a different program from the one behind the Tulsa page, so the two pages’ numbers aren’t directly comparable.
- What we left out. Redline reads a page’s text, not its images or anything a script loads. Notes our own claim checker flagged as saying more than a page’s text can show were removed before counting.
- The examples. Each before is a real line from one of these homepages, and the after is Redline’s rewrite of it. We don’t name the business, and we replaced its name and city with words in brackets.
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