Redline's AI reads your home page and writes a free teardown: what to change and why. No card needed. After it, you can buy a rewrite.
$49: your home page's first screen, up to 10 lines rewritten, each with the reason. $149: your home page and up to 5 more pages, up to 20 lines on each, plus a new Google title and description for each page. Both are words only, for you to paste in, at a private link, with a full refund within 14 days (email sales@redlinemysite.com).
Sample report for an earlier version of one of our own sites
theaccountablelifeseries.com is ours. Redline's AI wrote this report to that site's owner, from the site's own words. The full sample report had 79 changes across 6 pages. Below: the report's own "Start here" list, then 3 of its change cards, picked because they're about clearer wording. This sample is a full rewrite ($149). The $49 first-screen rewrite covers your home page's first screen only.
79 changes across 6 pages. Do these 3 first:
Where: The big headline at the top of your home page
It says now:
Change it to:
Why: 'Take the day home' names the problem the way a tired visitor would say it. 'Reaction' and 'repair' are the site's own terms and fit better as the explanation underneath than as the hook.
Where: The words at the start of the paragraph just after "I coach men who run a business, one-on-one,…" on your home page
It says now:
Change it to:
Why: The time cost is the first doubt a busy visitor has. Putting it on the button answers it before the click. This should be the one main button on the first screen.
Where: The line just after "Weeks 0, 13 and 26: how often you…" on your /work page
It says now:
Change it to:
Why: 'Come-back time' needs a sentence of explanation before it means anything. The new line describes what the reader would actually be measuring.
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